"Retribution"
(Science fiction)

NFG Magazine has a flash fiction contest every issue called "The Great 69er." For those of you who don't know, flash fiction is extremely brief fiction. The word count depends on who you ask, but as a rule of thumb it's anything 500 words or less. The Great 69er requires the entries be exactly 69 words (they have an amusing sense of humor at NFG). I'm not a huge fan of flash fiction, but I figured what the heck... and wrote this alien abduction piece. It is, as required, exactly 69 words, making this introduction you're reading longer than the piece itself.

"Retribution"
(In its entirety)
by David M. Fitzpatrick

Nobody believed the aliens took me. Laughter, scorn, accusation… shrinks, drugs, institutions—I never buckled. I always held firm.

At eighteen I wandered, searching. I was thirty-five when I found them. They owed me more than a job, but the job will do.

I’m good at it, and advise my employer well. Tonight, we'll take my entire family and all my false friends. Let me man the anal probe.

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