"Tenancy Uncommon"
(Horror)

This is a Lovecraftian-style supernatural horror tale. Yes, it might come across as a pastiche. Then again, maybe not. I was in the mood to write something Lovecraftian, so I did. Here it is. Thanks to Jonathan Schlosser for including it in the final edition of the Candlelight series.

There's an amusing story about this one. I'm a Roger Zelazny fan, and Roger introduced a short story in his collection by relating how he had sent it to a magazine. The magazine loved it, but asked him to cut it to 4,500 words. "The story is 9,000 words," Zelazny wrote. "Crossing out every other word made it sound funny, so I didn't." I wrote "Tenancy Uncommon" originally in 2002 and sent it to Weird Tales. It was 9,000 words. WT told me if I cut it to 6,000 words, they'd publish it. To paraphrase Zelazny, crossing out every third word made it sound funny, so I didn't. I've only sent the story to two other publications, both Lovecraftian anthologies, and while it made the short list for each, ultimately was cut. But here it is.

Many people have asked me what the title means. WT kept referring to it as "Tenancy Unknown." The title is a play on the legal term "tenancy in common." Read about it on Wikipedia if you're interested, and that should give you a stronger feel for the play on words that this title is (well, once you've read the entire story, anyway). The short version: Tenancy in common refers to multiple owners owning shares of the same real estate; when one tenant in common dies, his share passes to his heirs. It can get messy; a friend of mine knows of a case like this in Maine where a piece of property was passed down through multiple generations, so that now there are something like 29 owners of this tiny oceanfront plot of land and its house. Nobody can get rid of anybody, yet nobody can force anyone involved to pay for upkeep. It's a legal mess thanks to a poorly written will. Such a legal tangle is at the heart of this supernatural tale, but the tenancy here is anything but "in common"; it's very, very uncommon.
 

"Tenancy Uncommon"
by David M. Fitzpatrick

“Congratulations,” the old man said in a gravelly voice as he stood up behind the old wooden desk, fishing a ring of keys from his pocket. “It’s all yours.”

“I appreciate you staying an extra week, Mr. Gillison,” Rick Sanborn said. “It’s made the transition easier. I’m still surprised you’ve sold it for as little as you did—or that you’ve sold it at all.”

“Well, these old bones can’t take the Maine winters anymore,” Gillison said, a grimace on his grizzled face. “I’m heading to Florida next week, so you’ve got that long if you think of any questions.”

“Florida, eh? Whereabouts?”

“Outside Melbourne.”

“Flying down?”

“No, we have a motor home.”

“Really? What kind?”

Gillison grinned. “You ask a lot of questions, Sanborn.”

Sanborn smiled. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to pry. I’m just a curious sort of guy.”

“Oh, no worries with me,” Gillison said, dismissing him with a wave of a hand. “But take a piece of advice from an old man who’s managed properties a long time: when it comes to tenants, mind your own business.”

“I leave them alone,” Sanborn said. “I just like to know what they do for businesses, who works for them, things like that.”

Gillison was shaking his head vehemently. “That’s going too far. All you have to know is who pays the rent. Anything else is extraneous. If they make trouble, warn them. If they keep it up, toss them. But who works there and what’s going on is none of your business. Collect the money and take care of the building—that’s it.”

“I think I should know what’s going on in my buildings.”

“Listen, I don’t know how it works at your other properties, but it doesn’t work like that in this building,” Gillison said with a pointing finger. “Don’t go looking for trouble. If you never listen to anything else I say, listen to that.”

Sanborn could sense the utter stalemate, so he manufactured a smile and said, “Sound advice, Mr. Gillison.”

#

The next morning, he reviewed Gillison’s tenant list. The place held a broad repertoire of businesses, all good tenants who were current or ahead on their rents. There were stores and restaurants on the street level, and a wide variety on the second, third and fourth floors: a real estate abstractor, an artist, a computer consultant, a Web designer, a hypnotist, an addicts’ support group, a telemarketer, a sculptor, a religious group, some accountants, a couple of lawyers, and a watch and clock repairman who had been there nearly fifty years. The fourth floor had just two spaces: a studio apartment rented by a local businessman, and an empty unit. The fifth, and top, floor was occupied by a tenant identified as “T. Lindstrom,” who had been there one hundred twenty-eight years.

Sanborn blinked in surprise and looked again at the hand-scrawled number. It was clearly “128.” Obviously, it should have been 12 or 18, or even 28. The amusing error put T. Lindstrom in that office since the place was built in 1879.

He regarded the entry thoughtfully. All the other tenants had first names. To top it off, there was no indication of what sort of business Lindstrom operated, or for what he used the space.

He headed downstairs to the building’s directory board. All the tenants on the second through fifth were ordered by floor. The fifth floor had no entry. It was damn peculiar. Sanborn headed back up.

On the second floor, he met a young man leaving an office and heading for the stairway, catalog case in hand. He smiled and nodded at Sanborn.
“You must be Michael Simmons,” Sanborn said. “Computer guy?”

The guy stopped, brow furrowing. “Sure am. And you are…?”

“Rick Sanborn,” he said, extending a hand.

“Oh, the new owner,” Mike said, grasping his hand and shaking it. “Good to meet you, and call me Mike. You’re not raising the rent, are you?”
“Not at all. Tell me, Mike, do you know the other tenants?”

“Mostly. I take care of almost everyone’s computers in the building. I give them all huge discounts. And the same applies to you, so yell if you need a hand. Gilly barely used his computer. Liked to do everything on paper.”

“You’re telling me,” Sanborn said with a chuckle. “Maybe I could hire you to get his building’s books into electronic form and merge with my records at my plaza office. We could trade off some rent.”

The young man brightened. “Sounds great. I’m here most days and all hours, so let me know when you want to get together.”

“I’ll be down the hall Saturday quite late, if you’re free. Seven o’clock?”

“I’m there.”

“But I have a question,” Sanborn said. “The guy on the fifth floor, Lindstrom… what does he do?”

Mike shrugged. “No idea. Never seen him. Gilly didn’t tell you?”

“Looks like Gilly didn’t know and didn’t care,” Sanborn said. “Anyway, it was nice meeting you, Mike. I’ll see you Saturday night.”

#

“That didn’t take long,” Gillison said with a chuckle when Sanborn called him five minutes later.

“I was going over the tenant list,” Sanborn said. “This guy on the fifth floor, T. Lindstrom… what’s his first name? And what does he do?”

There was a cold silence on the other end of the phone that lasted so long Sanborn thought the line had disconnected, but finally Gillison’s quiet voice said, “I thought I gave you a good piece of advice, Rick. Lindstrom has paid his rent faithfully since long before I owned the place. He’s nothing to worry about.”

“I know you feel I’m prying,” Sanborn said, “but I don’t think knowing a tenant’s first name and occupation is too much to ask.”

“Well, I can’t help you,” Gillison said. “He’s been ‘T. Lindstrom’ since I bought the building in 1970 and damned if I know what he does up there. And you’ll do well to forget about it and just collect the rent.”

There was no arguing that poing with Gillison, so Sanborn changed the subject. “You wrote down that Lindstrom has been a tenant for a hundred twenty-eight years, which I assume was in error.”

“Not at all. He’s been here since Ransford Gentry built the place in 1879. I’m sure it’s his grandson up there by now.”

“If that’s true, then it sounds less like a lease and more like a tenancy in common,” Sanborn said. “I didn’t plan to inherit a co-owner with this building.”

“And you didn’t. Check the lease; it’s all there, and it’s all legal,” Gillison said. “Now, just forget about Lindstrom, and stay clear of the fifth floor.”

#

Sanborn spent the afternoon meeting his tenants, going from the street level to the fourth floor, shaking hands like he was running for office. It took him five hours to make the expedition from the street level to the fourth floor. The only absent tenant was the fifty-year resident watch and clock repair guy, a man named Wallace Storey. Along the way, he asked everyone about Lindstrom. None had met him. Many didn’t realize he was on the fifth floor at all, or that there even was a fifth floor.

John Clifford, the apartment tenant on half of the fourth floor, was a middle-aged man who had inherited his wealth from his father and spent his day playing the stock market on his computer. He also hadn’t met Lindstrom.

“Can’t say I’ve ever even heard him,” Clifford said. “Been here a while, I understand.”

“You could say that,” Sanborn said, his frustration growing. “You know, nobody in this entire building has met this guy. I figured if anyone had, it’d be you—being up here on the fourth floor and all. He’d have to go right past you.”

Clifford shook his head. “Sorry. I only knew there was anyone up there at all because Wally told me when I was moving in. Warned me not to take this apartment, that the guy up there was dangerous.”

It was the closest thing to pay dirt Sanborn had gotten yet. “And you moved in anyway? Why?”

“Mostly because Wally seemed like a fruitcake,” Clifford said with a half-grin. “If you’ve met Wally, you know what I mean.”

#

Per his posted hours, Wally Storey was in at six the next morning, and Sanborn was there shortly after. Storey ran a clock repair shop, all right—there were at least a hundred clocks in there. The whole place was a ticking, tocking, buzzing, humming, whirring deluge. Clocks in various stages of repair were stacked on workbenches, shelves, tables, desks, and chairs. Watches littered the place like the aftermath of a timepiece storm.

Wally sat in the middle of it all, a jeweler’s glass in his eye and his tongue poking out as he worked on a silver pocket watch on a long sterling chain. He looked up briefly as Sanborn entered.

“Morning, Sanborn,” the seventy-something man said.

“How’d you know my name?” Sanborn asked.

“Never get customers this early unless they’re carrying a clock,” he said. “And a few of the folks on my floor said you introduced yourself around yesterday. I figure you must be you.”

“And I am.”

“But you’re not here to say hello,” the man said, carefully working a tiny screwdriver on the miniature components. “Like you asked everyone yesterday, you want to know about Lindstrom—as well you should, since barely anyone has seen him in all the years he’s been up there. You’re looking at the only guy alive who has.”

Sanborn’s heart skipped a beat. “Who is he? And what does he do up there?”

The old-timer chuckled, set the watch and the tool aside, and pulled the magnifier out of his eye. He spun on his chair and faced Sanborn. “I don’t know any of that. After Old Joe Morrow told me the story back in ’59, I was curious… but not til ‘78, when Gilly asked me to do him a favor, did I lay eyes on him.”

“Joe Morrow?” Sanborn echoed.

“I know that curiosity’s burning you up, but let me warn you first,” Wally said. “You might not wanna hear my story.”

“Oh, I want to hear,” Sanborn said.

“Then you flip around that sign that says ‘Back in 15 Minutes,’” Wally said. “That’ll be all we’ll need to take this trip back in time. But it’ll take you a lot longer to deal with it.”

#

It was June of 1959 and I’d just inherited my father’s business. He’d passed on—lung cancer from those damn stogies he always smoked. Dad had run the business out of our house, but all those ticking clocks reminded Mother of him, so I moved it here. There was no room in my little house, and my young bride Millie wouldn’t have stood for all the ticking anyway.

The first week I was here, Joe Morrow and I got to talking. Morrow had been an insurance man in the building from the late 1890s until he bought the place, in the same space his dad had run a haberdashery when the place was first built. So Joe was giving me the low-down on the tenants and he said to me, “Just stay away from the fifth floor.” I asked him why and he said, “The man up there is bad news. But you leave him alone and you’ll have nothing to worry about.”

Well, I was young, so I pushed for details. He got awfully nervous about it, and said, “Let me tell you, I’ve never seen the man, don’t know the first thing about him, but I do know what my daddy told me when I was young. He saw Lindstrom, you know.”

Now, I have to rewind this tale all the way back to 1879, because this part is really Joe Morrow’s tale. Ransford Gentry, the original owner, had pretty well filled the new building except for the fifth floor. Joe’s daddy was there the first day tenants moved in, talking to Gentry, when this guy walked up. He was dressed all in black with a cloak and a top hat and carried a black cane—a lot like how you see Jack the Ripper in drawings and stuff. He had a dark face, bloodshot eyes, and a big, black mustache. He said to Gentry, “I understand your fifth floor is unoccupied. I would like to lease it.”
“The fifth floor is unfinished, sir,” Gentry said to the man. “We hadn’t planned on its completion until next spring. I have other spaces still available, however.”
But the man said, “No, I want the entire fifth floor and I will finish it. But I require a ninety-nine year lease.”

Well, Gentry was a businessman, and had no problem with that, but of course there were particulars to write into the lease. Lindstrom had no problem paying quite a high rate, so Gentry took him to his office to ink the deal, and that’s the last Joe’s dad saw of him.

The rent was to be delivered to Gentry on the morning of the first of the month, and it was; but it always turned up in an envelope on his office desk, even though the office was locked. Gentry went to see Lindstrom about this every time it happened, for the first six months, but Lindstrom would never answer the door. Finally, Gentry just accepted it.

Now we fast-forward to 1919—same year as the Black Sox scandal. Old Joe Morrow had bought the building and taken over all tenants, but one of the conditions of the sale was that Lindstrom’s lease had to be honored. Joe had no problem with that, even though no one had seen Lindstrom since the day he’d signed the lease in 1879. Well, the rent kept appearing on the office desk on the first of every month while Joe owned the place, and he never objected since he was getting paid. But he remembered his old man telling him how strange Lindstrom had been—nearly a half-century before.

I guess there was an overall chill to the way Joe talked about the guy, but he’d been getting paid regularly for thirty-four years and that was good enough for him. But me, I was curious as hell. It was like some great mystery I had to solve. So after Morrow left, I locked up and headed straight for the fifth floor. I was nervous, but I thought, “He’s just another guy, strange or not.” I climbed that last flight of stairs and stopped before this huge door—the brass plate, which was old and tarnished, said “T. Lindstrom” in small letters. In the old days, all the tenants had plates like that. Nobody did anymore, except Lindstrom.

Long story short: I beat on that door and hollered my ass off for ten minutes. Not a word. I did it three more times that day, and every day for the rest of that month. Never got an answer.

I had a plan, though. When the last day of that month rolled around, I stayed late. The building was empty and locked up. I took a chair down, parked outside Morrow’s office, and got comfortable with a good book. Took me all night and I never went to sleep. Morrow showed up with the sun and he knew what it was all about. He said to me, “I’ve tried that, Wally; it’s no use.”

There’s one door to that office, and it was locked with a deadbolt. The windows were all locked from the inside, and there wasn’t any other way in. But there it was, a white envelope with Morrow’s name on it, and inside was the rent in cash with a brief note. “Here is the rent,” it read, and it was signed “T. Lindstrom.” That was it. Morrow was nervous about it but he smiled at me and said he’d long ago given up trying to figure it all out.

Lindstrom’s lease ran out in 1978. By then, Morrow was dead and Gillison had been here eight years. I had long ago given up pounding on that door, but I never forgot about him being up there.

So Gillison came to me one day and said, “Wally, I was hoping you could do me a favor.”

I said, “Sure, Gilly. Need a clock fixed?”

He looked nervous and said, “No, nothing like that. But it’d be worth a year’s free rent for you.”

I was shocked when he said it, and for a fleeting moment I wondered if he wanted me to kill his wife or something. So I said, “Sounds good. What do I have to do?”

And he said, “You know that guy on the fifth floor?”

I said, “Yes, but I’ve never met him. Nobody has.”

Gilly said, “He signed a ninety-nine year lease in 1879 and it runs out tomorrow night at six thirty-four P.M. exactly.”

I started thinking, as I had so many times, about Lindstrom, and I said, “Yeah, it must be his grandson now, being almost a hundred years and all.”
He said, “Yeah. Well, I need to renew the lease and I want you to bring up the papers for him to sign.”

So many things occurred to me just then—like how the hell was I going to get the guy to answer the door; how excited I would be if he finally did; why Gillison didn’t just end the lease and toss the guy out since he creeped everyone out being up there, like he had and his father and maybe his grandfather had before him. But somehow I knew the answers to all my questions. And I knew Gilly was afraid of him, though I didn’t know why. I suspect he’d heard passed-down stories that I never did, but I’d get my own story to tell soon enough.

For a year rent-free, I could handle a little creepiness. So I agreed, and Gilly handed me a folder. “The top one is my agreement with you,” he said. “Sign the copies and keep one for yourself. The other is for Lindstrom. It renews his lease for another twenty-nine years. You must bring the lease to him at six-twenty-five tomorrow evening, and he will either sign it or refuse it by six-thirty-four.”

Seemed strange to me, but who was I to care? I signed the contract, which stipulated I had a year’s free rent regardless of the outcome. All I had to do was deliver the lease to Lindstrom and return either with it signed or not, at Lindstrom’s discretion.

I went up early, at about three the next afternoon. I hadn’t been there in nearly twenty years, and nothing had changed except that everything was older. The brass plate was more tarnished, although I could still read it clearly. I beat on his door for a half hour. Called out that I had the lease to renew. He never answered. Not a hint anyone was in there. I came back at four-thirty and got the same result. At five, the building cleared out. I kept trying every fifteen minutes.

At nearly six-twenty-five I headed back up, but now I was shaking like a leaf, and I didn’t know why. I topped the fifth floor stairs and, gripping the banister with my left hand, raised up my right and rapped on the wide door three hard raps—and immediately, the door opened.

I forgot to breathe and there he stood before me. He was just like Joe Morrow had described: dressed in black, with a cloak and top hat; his face dark and his eyes bloodshot; and he wore a big, black mustache. He had a cane in one hand and held the door open with the other.

I was stunned. My hand gripped the banister so tight I was sure I was gonna splinter wood right there. Then he spoke in a low, even voice that chilled my bones: “You have papers for me to sign?”

I nodded and handed them over. There was no hiding my trembling; the lease fluttered in my hand like a dead leaf in an October windstorm. He took them from me with a ghostly white hand and read them over carefully. I was barely able to breathe and wondered if my heart were going to smash through my ribs like Superman through a brick wall. When he finished reading, he closed the pages and handed Gilly’s copy back to me.

I was about to ask if he was going to sign them, and then I saw his signature at the bottom. Yes, I was scared and confused; but I know damn well he’d never put pen to paper. He’d just looked at them. Yet they were signed.

Then he said, “Good evening,” and shut the door in my face. And I ran like a bionic jackrabbit, down four flights of stairs and out the door, left my office open and everything. I didn’t come back until the morning light the following day. I told Gilly I’d earned that free year and he said, “Yeah, I suspect you did.”

And that’s the clockman’s tale, Sanborn. You can fast-forward one more time. Back to 2007.

#

Sanborn blinked himself back to full control. His breathing had become thick and shallow as he listened, and now the ending, strange as it was, seemed somehow anticlimactic. “That was it?”

“You need more?” Wally said.

“Well, it was just a man who signed a lease,” Sanborn said. “I was expecting something more sinister, I guess.”

“Well, there are two things here,” Wally said. “First, the fact that it was the same man who signed the original lease a century earlier makes it pretty sinister, if you ask me.”

“You don’t know that it was him.”

“It seems pretty likely. But I won’t argue it, because you won’t believe me. Just like you won’t believe the other thing. And that is, second, what I saw beyond Lindstrom in that fifth-floor space was enough to convince me that he was the same guy, and that what was going on up on that fifth floor was beyond anything I wanted to mess with.”

“You didn’t mention what was beyond him,” Sanborn said.

“That’s right, and I won’t. Like I said, you wouldn’t believe me. Everyone around here thinks I’m a little strange, and they’re right. I never was, you know, until that day. It changed me. I saw something… that I wish to hell I’d never seen. And he spoke to me, in my mind. Not as a voice, but as a feeling. He told me that what I was seeing would come to pass if I didn’t shut my mouth and just take that lease away with me, signed and delivered.”

“What did you see?” Sanborn pressed.

Wally shook his head with a smile. “Don’t waste your time, Sanborn. I’ve never told anyone. And I never left this building, either. You’d think I’d have packed up that day. But I knew someday I’d be of some use to someone about this. Like when your time comes, which will be soon enough.”
“What do you mean?” Sanborn said.

“Do your math, son,” the old man said.

Sanborn’s mind raced backward through Wally’s tale, and then it hit him. “The twenty-nine year renewal is up,” he said breathlessly. “This month?”
“This week,” Wally said. “At six thirty-four Saturday evening. And I’m not going up there for you, no matter how many years of free rent you offer.”

*     *     *

"Tenancy Uncommon" appears in the final installment of the acclaimed Candlelight anthology series. Order it here.

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