"Fruition to the Core"
(Dark fantasy)

It's difficult to excerpt a 796-word flash-fiction story, but here's a teaser. This was accepted for Twisted Tongues, a UK magazine that is a POD through Lulu.com, along with another flash-fiction piece I wrote, "For Mary." Both will appear in issue #9.

Note: This was originally written for Gastronomicon II, an anthology sequel to the first that was perhaps the most original idea I've ever heard of in fiction anthologies. The Gastronomicon was a combination speculative fiction anthology and cookbook; the brief stories were to be accompanied by a recipe that somehow was linked with the story. For mine, I included an old Amish recipe for applesauce and apple butter. Sadly, the editor pulled plans to run Gastronomicon II, leaving me with a piece I couldn't imagine going anywhere else. As it turns out, it will fit nicely in Twisted Tongues... sans the apple-based recipes, of course.
 

"Fruition to the Core"
(Excerpt)
by David M. Fitzpatrick

Elwin visited the one-eyed Mountain Witch, bringing every coin he had saved for years. “Forty-two silver,” the ancient hag rasped when he produced the coins. “Tell me of your desire.”

“I desire my true love,” Elwin said. “Melina and I have been together since we were children. Every day I looked into her eyes and told her how we would one day marry. I told her how, one day, she would bear me many fine sons. I told her of the home we would build in the hills, and the land we would farm, and how we would grow old together there. Always I promised her happiness. Forever would I provide for her.”

“How did she respond to these promises?” the witch asked, stroking her hairy chin.

“She never had to—our hearts have always been one,” Elwin said. “But now her father keeps us apart. He’s destroying us; I must have him out of our way. Blinded, maimed, banished, killed—it matters not.”

The witch considered this with her yellow eye for a brief eternity. “Give me a lock of your hair,” she said, “then sleep in my woodshed tonight, so that my spell may incubate..."

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As I said, it's tough to excerpt a 796-word flash-fiction piece. Elwin heads back to see Melina and confront her father, and let the Mountain Witch's spell do its thing. But there's always a caveat when working with the ways of magic...

To read the whole story, order Twisted Tongues #9.
 

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